Gemini Ediriweera
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I like how it was a lot of narrative, it made you feel like you were in the moment.
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I like the sensory details!
I could really picture it.
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It was interesting to include the dialogue in the podcast! I really like how you told the story.
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I really liked how you included dialogue in your story. It added character and made it more enjoyable.
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Your story was very detailed and interesting. Good Job!!!
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I like how relatable your story is. I can feel the anxiousness you felt.
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I would have been terrified too!
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I thought that this was a very important and well-presented message, good job!
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Very detailed with a relatable message about growing up and being independent
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I liked your story a lot, and reminded me a lot of my first day of work.
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You made it seem like you were having a conversation with someone which was really nice to listen to. I really enjoyed your story.
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It was nice that there was someone to talk you through your nerves and talk about how she too made mistakes even after 5 years of employment.
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I think we can all relate to being in new surroundings and not being comfortable and I think you did a great job capturing that feeling.
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I like how descriptive you were throughout the whole story. I can really relate to how you felt; I felt the same way on my first day of work 🙂
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I liked your use of description and dialogue throughout the story.
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I just got a new job in august and it was really confusing for a while and I too got worked up. It was good to see that you overcame your fears.
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I loved how you correlated your experience from work to your first day of school. It was very descriptive and extremely well written!!
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This is a nice coming of age story, detailing how a person grows up and experiences new things.
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I feel like this provides valuable insight into growing up and learning to take steps towards adulthood; I liked the flashback to kindergarten. The parallels were cool.
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Your story was ver interesting to listen to and I felt that I can relate!!
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I loved the message and you did a great job telling your story.
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That sounded like a fantastic lesson!
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